How to Create a Bad Impression
with No Effort at All – Five! |
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Due to popular demand, here are more examples of what
not to do in cover letters and basic queries!
First, as before, these are all real, having
been collected over several years. Second, with one
exception, these items are from native English speakers.
Finally, in order to give you the real effect, we haven't
corrected capitalization, spelling, punctuation, or
grammar.
| Applicant's Actual Written
Statement |
What the Employer Might
Think |
| Hello, I am a first year
graduate, [location 1] physiotherapist
researching the possibilities of working
in [location 2]. I realise 2 years experience
is needed, but that will be sonn be the
case and i want to have the next year
panned so i can make the most of working
possibilities. |
Huh? |
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| Would you please send
me more info on Emergency job openings
in [location] along with saley infomation. |
The positions are not
on sale. |
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| I am very interested about
these positions.I have 12yrs. of experience
in nursing. It is a wide varity.Please
excuse the typing.Lookig forwnard to
your response. |
Well, at least s/he asked
us to excuse the typing. |
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| ms [name], interested
in a position in [location]. saw you
web page on the many position needed. |
We don't have so many
positions available that we'd hire you. |
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| i visited your web site
and i find it interesting .i am looking
for a job for general practitioners or
im emergency medicine. i look forward
to you to reply me and help me in my
search.i expect a reply very soon |
You can expect a reply
all you want, but you won't get one. |
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| Hi I am interseted on
finding job in Vancouver as a pharmacist.
I am working in CA right now and I love
to move to cannada. Please tell me if
there is a job available and if there
is how much is the salary. |
Make sure you know how
to spell the name of the country in which
you'd like to work. |
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| HI, I would like to know
u r empoyment opptunities in different
countries thank u. |
You'd like to know, but
we won't tell you. |
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To avoid finding something you wrote on this list,
see our helpful articles with tips about spelling,
grammar, punctuation, and presentation in résumés
and cover letters, e.g. Write
the Right Résumé, Write
an Effective Cover Letter, Common
Résumé Mistakes, Proofreading
Tips, Dear
Cindy – A Healthcare Recruiter Driven Crazy
By Jargon, Dear
Cindy – Types of Résumés.
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Article published on Dec 11
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